I was taking a look at some of the archives yesterday and realized that my posts of late have been a little wordy. A little wordy like the ocean is a little moist. It’s out of hand.
Perhaps it’s because I’m asked on a daily basis to cram twenty-seven pages of information and selling points into thirty seconds. Or fifty words. Or sometimes, five bullet points. Whatever the case may be I apologize for my insensitive behavior and promise to try to be a little more concise. It’ll be hard, but I know that your time is valuable and you don’t want to spend ten minutes reading these posts and then another hour and a half trying to make some sense of the jumbled writing and poor grammar.
See what I mean? 132 words to say one thing: I need to edit these posts better so they aren’t so long and boring.
Shoot.
I’m trying. I promise.
Perhaps it’s because I’m asked on a daily basis to cram twenty-seven pages of information and selling points into thirty seconds. Or fifty words. Or sometimes, five bullet points. Whatever the case may be I apologize for my insensitive behavior and promise to try to be a little more concise. It’ll be hard, but I know that your time is valuable and you don’t want to spend ten minutes reading these posts and then another hour and a half trying to make some sense of the jumbled writing and poor grammar.
See what I mean? 132 words to say one thing: I need to edit these posts better so they aren’t so long and boring.
Shoot.
I’m trying. I promise.
I agree...to the utmost...I enjoy them =)
suck ups
The title of the blog is "Words". That's what we expect.
Can you rename your blog, "Pictures"?
No, but seriously, you should remove the subtitle. I don't know when you put that up, but they're really close to good.
they may be loads of words, but they are your words... own them and keep it real.
Thanks for the blog-visit. But beware, I tend to be on the wordy side myself. *grin*